DEAR DIARY ???!!!? what should i write ?

Question

Dear Diary?
well i have to write a diary entrant on how my family members who have broken my heart (its homework for english class)...its about a family who doesn't have love each other and father is alcoholic
except i dunno how to start it.....
Dear Diary, today my family broke me into a million pieces....

so if someone can help me get started? please?

Answer 1

Dear Diary,

The pain is unbearable. Its a profound feeling of loneliness and hatred.A feeling of knives tearing into every secret i have, and exposing the wound of pain i have gathered over the years. My heart is shattered into a million pieces. A simple visit to the doctor cant cure a cold heart like my fathers, or a broken down being like me. how could he have done this to me? My father has met the passion of his life, and he wants to spend all the time he can with it. hes fallen head over heels in love with it, and its my worst enemy, alcohol. hes only a part of my torn up family. Each member of the family fights in unison. We fight to protect any pieces of identity that we still have, and when we drop them, most of the time we leave them for eternity, but sometimes we pick of the broken pieces and fit them back together. Each broken piece is part of the puzzle of life, the puzzle of happiness. Im trying my best to finish it so i can forever be blissfully happy, but for now, my family is torn, and i'll fight until death to be who i know i can be.

Answer 2

Dear Diary,

Today my family broke me into a million pieces. How is it that the one thing that is suppose to keep me together... tore me apart? My younger siblings pick on me and use me to get their homework done. My father drinks his day away, and my mother is never home. After school, the last place I ever want to be is at home. It is so loud there and so crowed, yet for some reason... I feel so alone.



*insert more details here*



:) What do you think? Nice start yeah??

Answer 3

Dear diary,



Today has been a long day, so many things have gone wrong since I last wrote. My dad has been laid off from his job and has taken to the booze again. If he isn't at the bar raising a tab we can not afford to pay, he is in the cold cellar raiding the stock of wine.





(how is that? this is supposed to be fictional.... right?)

Answer 4

Dear Diary,



My English teacher seems to think that she can pry into my private life by making me write this horribly personal diary entry. I wish I would tell her to keep her boundaries and stop asking me about things I don't wish to talk about.

Answer 5

Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

I know you'll keep them, and this is what I've

done



I've been a bad, bad girl for so long

I don't know how to change what went wrong

Daddy's little girl when he went away

What did it teach me? That love leaves



Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

Cuz you're the only one that I know who'll keep

them

Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

I know you'll keep them, and this is what I've

done



I've been down every road you could go

I made some bad choices as you know

Seems I have the whole world cradled in my hands

But its just like me not to understand



Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

Cuz you're the only one that I know who'll keep

them

Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

I've been a bad, bad girl



I learned my lessons

I turned myself around

I've got a guardian angel tattooed on my shoulder



She's been watching over me



Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

Cuz you're the only one that I know who'll keep

them

Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

I've been a bad, bad girl



Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

Cuz you're the only one that I know who'll keep

them

Dear, dear diary, I want to tell my secrets

I've been a bad, bad girl

Answer 6

Dear Diary, Today my family crushed my heart

Answer 7

dear diary,



my heart is yet again been ripped out. the whole everyone doesn't listen to me hurts alot. jason(brother read my diary and made a fool of me. i dont know wht to do???\







dear diary,



more like dear hell i am so sick of this place it hurts my tears have become a tradition

Answer 8

please tell me that this is suppose to be a diary entry of a person in the a story not your personal life, because that would be horribly inappropriate, and if that is the case, then i would make something up.



well hope this help. I hate depressing assignments, teenage life can be hard enough without teacher dwelling on it too.

dear diary, another bad day...

" " so dad came home drunk again...

" " so and so really mad me mad today because...

" " I dont know how much more i can take of this....

" " I wish my family was more.... sometimes

" " they dont know know how much they depress me

Answer 9

no start out casual. like after i went to the video store for blahblah person, i realized that blah blah. and talk about how this lead to whatever which is how you can reveal and link it to your general day to day emotions towards your family and how they broke your heart. eg: "why do they always have to this to me? just last month they..." but you should come up with how exactly they've hurt you on your own

Answer 10

What i like to do is just keep writing... even if it sucks and it is a terrible piece of literature.. JUST KEEP WRITING ! soon you'll think of something..



try not to stop and think. just keep writing